i realy like it but who's saying if your a alien why can you breath on earth? and also next time you could check your capital letters and i realy like the part when maximus says i want to go to earth that realy hooks the reader in
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ReplyDeletei realy like it but who's saying if your a alien why can you breath on earth? and also next time you could check your capital letters and i realy like the part when maximus says i want to go to earth that realy hooks the reader in
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